Things that worked well: Enigma codes, the build-up to the ending, Dutch tilts, pan up over shoulder, the ending itself, visual effects and the build-up of suspense/tension.
In terms of what could be improved, most people seem to think that I could have done a better job with the arrangement of my clips and intertitles (I’m guessing the clips at the beginning of the trailer became boring after a while), so this is something that I will work on in the future. I also got a comment about using better facial expressions, but as I am not a professional actress, I don’t really think this matters. I could’ve done a better job showing hatred towards the doll however, to fully demonstrate the relationship between the main characters.
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